
TimK
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Jan 6, 2006, 2:15 PM
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Re: [Storm Crow] My first Ever Engagement Pictures
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Not bad for your first time, but I'll point out a couple more things. There really isnt much to distinguish these as portraits by a professional compared to candids. This is due to the following reasons: Lack of lighting to enchance the subjects. This is very difficult on a dreary day. I know their particular schedule was rushed and you didnt really have a choice here, but in the future go for sunny days even in the winter. Everything Jesse said particularly fill flash is imperative. You dont need much, but it will fill in the dark areas around their eyes and add catchlights to their eyes. The girl is really, really dark around her eyes. Eye detail really brings out the personality of a portait. You want the couple to stand out from the background some how. It looks like you did use flash on some, but there is slightly too much flash causing that candid feel-again extremely difficult on a dull day. When posing, you want the couple to be involved in the same thing. One should not look at the camera while the other doesnt. Either they both look at the camera or neither. If they are interacting, like when he is kissing her, she should not look at the camera. When she is leaning on him with her eyes closed, he is staring off into the distance. Both of these disconnect them from each other and give the feeling that one of them sees something more important than their partner. Another thing to distinguish from a candid feel is effects. Try some soft focus and high contrast. It was such a dull day, use some Photoshop magic to add some pop. Since you asked the couple if they had ideas, I get the feeling you were not very confident in your own. I know that feeling exactly. Dont be afraid to flat out copy poses from other photogs as you get started. Nobody is posing anything that hasnt been done before. Sketch ideas in a flip book that you put in your pocket. I know how tough it is to start out, keep practicing - alot. Get comfortable with some "money shots" and use them every time, but also experiment with something new everytime too. And please dont take my words as criticism but as advice. I certainly received plenty over the years.
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