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My pulp fiction- style short

 

 


tenaciousd44
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Jul 19, 2004, 10:40 PM

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I am writing a Pulp Fiction styled short movie and I was wondering what people think of my idea. Here is the basic story and idea-
This story intertwines five stories in about twenty minutes. The stories are told through short clips that are jumbled up, leaving the viewer to try to piece everything together. It's kind of confusing, ut in a good way. My hope is that people would like to watch it several times.


CJBianco
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Jul 21, 2004, 2:39 PM

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Hello and congrats on the decision to write a short. They're oh so much fun! =)

"I am writing a Pulp Fiction styled short movie and I was wondering what people think of my idea."

Here's a tip on scriptwriting: Don't refer to it as "Pulp Fiction styled". The more you say this (aloud or in your mind), the more you will unconsciously try to emulate the original film. Instead, refer to it as something like a "non-linear storyline". This frees your mind a bit to be more creative.

"This story intertwines five stories in about twenty minutes. The stories are told through short clips that are jumbled up, leaving the viewer to try to piece everything together."

But what's the story? You've given me an editing structure. Who are these people? What do they want? Do they know each other? How are they connected?

If you're looking for a good source for short plot, you could do worse than to read anything by O. Henry. He's famous for the short story with a "twist" ending.

"My hope is that people would like to watch it several times."

That's what EVERYONE (scriptwriters/actors/directors/etc) hopes. =)

Good Luck,
Chris =)


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tenaciousd44
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Jul 21, 2004, 3:33 PM

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These are the characters:
Cory and Mark- two guys who are running a job for their boss, get in fight.
Dustin- A guy just trying to have fun but finds a dead body(Mark's)instead
Monty- A confused hitch hiker who gets caught up in the plot.
Maggie- Cory and Mark's boss.
Jarred and Mary- Two people out for a walk that find Cory's car.

Basically- Cory and Mark are robbing a convenient store, and then they are supposed to take the money and some cocaine to another person. They get in a fight and Cory kills Mark, but Cory gets shot too. Dustin finds the body of Mark on the way to play some golf. He has no idea who it is, but he accidently peed on him (explained in the script) so he takes him to a river and dumps him in. Monty is a hitchhiker who finds the car Cory and Mark were supposed to pick up with all of the cocainne in it (he doesn't know yet), and he steals it. He gets stopped by a cop. Monty accidently finds a gun in the car, so he shoots the cop and takes off. He makes it out of the city and ditches the car. He ends up getting picked up by Dustin (he's hitchiking again) and they drive away. Maggie is Cory and Mark's boss, and her story shows her killing a cop, then getting arrested. Jarred and Mary are out for a walk and they find Cory's car. Cory comes out and dies from the gunshot he recieved, and Jarred and Mary get "taken to the station."
The apparent ending is that Dustin and Moty drive away and get out of the state after Monty get's a ride from Dustin.
All of these stories are shown in small bits that are completely out of Chronological order. I think that once I make it, if it turns out like I'm planning, then the viewer will become intangled in the story and become so jerked around that they feel like they are a part f it.
If you have anymore information or advice, please post it. Smile
Thanks